ext_66942 ([identity profile] binaryalchemist.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragonimp 2009-05-03 11:12 pm (UTC)

Oh, I agree! For once I was *caught up* in the story, not sitting there analysing it to pieces. And I so hurt for Ed when he sat there in the rain--that 'tear' rolling down Al's cheek was a nice touch. And they have finally established the friendship between Roy and Hughes--probably because they're about to kill him soon...a lot more heart in this one. And that dream sequence in the middle was appropriately horrific. Very good job!

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