So glad to be reading this - I was thrilled when I saw you had posted it but I've been so busy.
Anyway, I just reread the prologue through chapter 4 since it had been a while and to get back into the zone :) I enjoyed this chapter - Ed and Riza's conversation and more intrigue about the war, Roy and Ed and the ointment and Ed's outburst - awesome - and Al... oh, Al... It was good to see him out and about, I was wondering when he would start being animate! I like how Roy picked up that something was going on.
And now, to read the revised version of Permission. YAY!
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Anyway, I just reread the prologue through chapter 4 since it had been a while and to get back into the zone :) I enjoyed this chapter - Ed and Riza's conversation and more intrigue about the war, Roy and Ed and the ointment and Ed's outburst - awesome - and Al... oh, Al... It was good to see him out and about, I was wondering when he would start being animate! I like how Roy picked up that something was going on.
And now, to read the revised version of Permission. YAY!