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dragonimp ([personal profile] dragonimp) wrote2008-07-27 03:24 pm
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I hate having to *ask*, but...

It's true that I wrote this mostly to get Cassie off my back, but I wouldn't mind some feedback on it. I know it falls apart toward the end and has no focus. I know it needs a greater structure. Is it just too weird? Does the execution suck? Am I better off dropping the idea? I'm dead serious, I want to hear what's wrong with it.