Better and better and better. I like the way you just barely dropped in a hint of Ed's automail, but not enough for Yu to really catch on yet. And I can't wait for the first time she sees a demonstration of what Ed can really do.
I fully expect Ed to win her over completely. It'll just be in ways she wouldn't necessarily have expected....
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Date: 2007-01-19 07:02 pm (UTC)I fully expect Ed to win her over completely. It'll just be in ways she wouldn't necessarily have expected....