hi! I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy this story. I have read all of the waiting thread so far but I have to say that although the stories before Mother arc were well written and fairly good, they didn't leave much of an impression on me.
However ever since you starter writting the Mother arc it was like a completly different story. Suddenly it because brilliant, not only good. The writting is so fluent, the characters have the same feel to them they had in anime yet as a reader I can easily feel the difference now, the experience that changed them subtly.
The banter is priceless and I'm giggling every few minutes.
The emotions are also beautifuly woven into the story, into the simple scenes. It shows the depth of feelings between characters without outright saying it.
While the other parts were good, this arc is simply brilliant and I am definitely bookmarking it on del.icio.us so that more people can come here and read it, and hopefully leave a lot of warm and encouraging feedback.
I hope I haven't offended you. It's only my personal view of things and you shouldn't take it too personally.
once angain, great work and I am off to read next chapters :)
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Date: 2007-12-16 11:15 pm (UTC)However ever since you starter writting the Mother arc it was like a completly different story. Suddenly it because brilliant, not only good. The writting is so fluent, the characters have the same feel to them they had in anime yet as a reader I can easily feel the difference now, the experience that changed them subtly.
The banter is priceless and I'm giggling every few minutes.
The emotions are also beautifuly woven into the story, into the simple scenes. It shows the depth of feelings between characters without outright saying it.
While the other parts were good, this arc is simply brilliant and I am definitely bookmarking it on del.icio.us so that more people can come here and read it, and hopefully leave a lot of warm and encouraging feedback.
I hope I haven't offended you. It's only my personal view of things and you shouldn't take it too personally.
once angain, great work and I am off to read next chapters :)