I hate having to *ask*, but...

Jul. 27th, 2008 03:24 pm
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It's true that I wrote this mostly to get Cassie off my back, but I wouldn't mind some feedback on it. I know it falls apart toward the end and has no focus. I know it needs a greater structure. Is it just too weird? Does the execution suck? Am I better off dropping the idea? I'm dead serious, I want to hear what's wrong with it.
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