Adolecent Mary Sue-ness!

I came across this yesterday while cleaning my room. I must have been 13 or 14 when I created this character. She was actually supposed to represent my friend (because we did that - made character avatars for each other in all our stories), but damn, is she a Mary Sue. I'm typing this up as-is, complete with spelling errors. My (current) comments are in [brackets]

( old story ideas and Mary Sue-ness ahead! )